its ok, i agree with what the other people said, it is too upbeat and that add "bbnnkk" sound kinda kills the flow.
a true masterpiece!
i loved it! the best thing about it(besides how funny it is) is how well the sound flows and how smooth the characters talk, keep the up the good werk!
absolutely wonderful work, but to all the 'detectives' out there that think they've uncovered a 'fraud' in the newgrounds potal, the person who submitted this has already said its not her werk. your not figuring out anything new. she also she posted it with permission.
I thought it sucked until the fireworks came out of her vagina!!! HAHA!
nothing wrong with anything!
this was perfect, i couldnt find anything to criticize it with. btw, your drawing skills have gotten better!
I loved number 4 because it combined the melodic riff from #3 and added a little twist to it.
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